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Take my Hand
Contributed by
matts_sweetie_04
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:07:49 PM in AEST
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Take my hand and lead the way.
Dont talk there are not words to say.
Just guide me through it all.
Guide me so I wont fall.
Take me to a place I have never been.
I just want to get there before it can all end.
Take my hand and lead the way.
Dont talk there are not words to say.
I just want to go where I can be myself.
Not like here like a forgotten book on a shelf.
Bring me to a speical place where I can beat all odds and turn my life around.
I want to be at a place where my feet can be planted firmly on the ground.
Take my hand and lead the way.
Dont talk there are not words to say.
There is such a place, I just have yet to find it.
Once I do find it though, I know it will be worth everything, every single bit.
There is a such place for I know it deep in my heart.
I just dont know where to look or how to start.
So please, just take my hand and lead the way.
Dont talk, for there are no words to say.
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Re: Take my Hand
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:09:42 PM AEST
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very good write,.....
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Re: Take my Hand
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:48:22 PM AEST
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As I read this my mind was flooded with many, many thoughts. It had a lyrical quality to it that was so relaxing to read.
Kie |
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Re: Take my Hand
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by ExoticDreamer on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 01:45:01 PM AEST
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| Truly there is something to be said for "quality of life" and I think you have hit the nail on the head with this one. Compelling, visual, and wanting. We all need a place where we can be ourselves. Hopefully, that place will be "home". :o) Nicely presented. A pleasure to read. |
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