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Storybook romance

Contributed by carmen_queasy on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:47:06 AM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

He stares at me with pure determination
I don’t dare look at him back
But I know passionate tears would be streaming down his face
As he begs me to fly away with him
I can feel the pressure of his hand on my shoulder
Finally I tear my eyes away from the nothingness
That protected me from reality
And look him dead in the eye
He tells me stories
Stories where he was the hero, and I was always there by his side
I love it when he’s enthusiastic, passionate
The innocence in his eyes makes my ***** skin crawl, though
Taking a drag on his cigarette
My life depends on it
I watch as he throws his arms around
Telling me about his latest dream where he flew above it all
And could control time
We can all control time, I told him
He throws his hands up in exasperation
I hear his voice falter as it slowly gets louder
I need him so much that he could gouge my eyes out right now
And I’d still stand by his side
As he saves the world in our story book land
He tells me how he hates me
I curl up and shy away like the little girl within
He takes my hand and says
‘I hate you so much that I ***** love you’
I wipe my pathetic tear and smile
As we stumble into our storybook romance choking on cigarette smoke
I ***** love him too

Copyright Â© carmen_queasy ... [ 2004-07-28 11:47:06]
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Re: Storybook romance (User Rating: 1 )
by becca_bruce2000 on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:02:09 PM AEST
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that is like no poem I have ever read. it is a okay poem but who the hell am I to say!!

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