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Right Behind You
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:34:40 AM in AEST
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I am right behind you,
In this thing you are trying to do,
Quitting smoking is a big step,
There are so many rewards you will get.
Your will & determination is great,
You’ve taken the first step past the gate,
I know life is tough for you right now,
We will get through it some how.
Don’t worry if it takes some time,
Quitting is a ladder that you must climb,
One day your will may feel a bit weak,
Other days you’ll be at the top of the peak.
I am with you all the way,
You are stronger with each new day,
With my by your side giving you support,
Helping you along with all your thoughts.
I know you can climb to the top,
Because you are giving it all you’ve got,
I am so proud of how well you have done,
I now quitting smoking is hard & not much fun.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-28 11:34:40]
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Re: Right Behind You
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:45:47 AM AEST
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Way to go Mark!!! Keep it up!!! Quitting is a life preserver in the ocean of life. Now don't go eating to replace all them cravings! teeheehee! Good luck, and nice write pixie!
Stand by yourrrrrrr man! :-)
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Right Behind You
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:28:44 PM AEST
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| bravo... |
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Re: Right Behind You
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by Mick_Puttock on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:44:19 PM AEST
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| Great to hear, i Hope that Mark sticks to it, make sure you support him. I gave up years ago, best move I ever made. |
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Re: Right Behind You
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by brew on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:50:25 PM AEST
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| Something to give up that you need and want so much is a GREAT step..........I smoke as well, and want to quit. Seems tho, I am not ready.......for I use all excuses in the book. Good write and He is lucky to have you to stand behind him! |
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Re: Right Behind You
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by Sagacious on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:37:24 PM AEST
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| Your poem is the perfect expression of support, and surely will help to buttress those inevitable days of weakness. Everyone attempting to quit (whatever vice it may be) should be so lucky as to have a partner such as you. Good luck, to you and yours. Supportively, -KAC- |
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Re: Right Behind You
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by liquidsunshine on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 08:21:16 PM AEST
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It's great to know he's quitting! That's terriffic!
Your poem isn't too shabby either, if I do say so myself.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Right Behind You
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:03:18 PM AEST
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| Great now help me Quit! Good luck to him! Christina |
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Re: Right Behind You
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:15:45 AM AEST
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How loving and supportive of you Pixie.....It is the hardest thing I've ever tackled. In fact, if I could I'd have chewed them!
But looking back now, I'm so glad I rid myself of such a dirty habit, and expensive too!
Please tell him I'm rooting for him too!
If I can do it, I know he can too!
Poetic hugs for both of you
Consue |
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Re: Right Behind You
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by little_genna on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 06:30:24 AM AEST
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With someone like you by his side hun he will get there. Well done to Mark fro trying to quit I hope he manages to. Sweet write as well!
Love
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