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In The Candle Light
Contributed by
pixie
on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:32:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Casting shadows in the twilight,
Burning orange in the dark night,
Flickering & frolicking around,
Whilst never making a sound.
Candlelight sets the romance,
Creating the heavenly dance,
Shining like the North star,
It can be seen even from afar.
Making love in the candles glare,
Moving softly as you lovingly stare,
Beyond your loves eyes into their soul.
This is a moment that time never stole.
Skin glowing as the wax burns,
Passion flares as the tide turns,
Holding your lover so very close,
Using their body as your lustful host.
As the night air solely lingers,
You gently caress with your fingers,
Your suitors body & their mind,
The soft light makes love easy to find.
Making love in the candle’s presence,
Causes two to become one essence,
As lovers rock in the candle light,
The fervour scorches into the night.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-28 11:32:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: In The Candle Light
(User Rating: 1 ) by WinterFawn on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:52:02 AM AEST (User
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The romance of making love by candle light..very beautifully composed pixie!....
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Re: In The Candle Light
(User Rating: 1 ) by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:27:01 PM AEST (User
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beautiful..........
such romance.........isn't wonerful to be in love.......... |
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Re: In The Candle Light
(User Rating: 1 ) by matts_sweetie_04 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:44:56 PM AEST (User
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I loved this poem. It captures the wonderful emotions of it all. Romance and being in love is wonderful and you have captured that. |
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Re: In The Candle Light
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:23:01 PM AEST (User
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this is sooo beautiful and sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: In The Candle Light
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:12:42 AM AEST (User
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Exquisite Delight.......that's all I have left., cause I'm all out of breathe! That was just dazzling with desire.....and delicious liveliness of soul!
You are so talented my dear......and not afraid to let us all know! That takes courage. and that you too!
Thank you so much for sharing this great write!
Poetic hugs
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Re: In The Candle Light
(User Rating: 1 ) by little_genna on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 06:32:45 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful |
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