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Âlways and Forever
Contributed by
trustisajoke
on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:28:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When our time is done
im surrounded by feelings
feelings of love and dissapointment
i should of told you i loved you
when i knew out love was true
i should of told you i cared
before what you went through
when my love dies
your beautiful eyes
are what i cant forget
my helpless cries
my unwritten lies
why did you have to go so soon
i wish i could have kissed you
i dream about it every night
i wish i could of hugged you
and always held you tight
i wish you could have loved me
and never let me go
i wish we could have been
there for me
so i could love you so
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trustisajoke
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2004-07-28 11:28:24]
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Re: Âlways and Forever
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:36:03 AM AEST
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Awwww such a sad and moving poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Âlways and Forever
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:49:17 AM AEST
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This is a sad and torturous write. The pangs of your love can be felt for miles!
and btw...I like your screen name.
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Âlways and Forever
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by carmen_queasy on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:52:53 AM AEST
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| Such a beautiful poem. The line; 'I wish I could have hugged you and always held you tight i wish you could have loved me and never let me go' hit me hard. |
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