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Fearing the inevitable
Contributed by
jenny21614
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:29:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Fear.
Of nothing, of being nothing.
Wasting away, my muscles detioriating,
sitting in a cloud,
blinded by the fog.
Legs bound by chains,
Powerless to break away.
Surrounded by mahogany.
Every ounce of hope and dreams drifting out of my soul,
watching them.
Misting the world with their colors, floating into the sky.
Without me.
Wasting away, bounded by the chains.
Waiting for nothing, fearing everything.
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jenny21614
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2004-07-28 09:29:31]
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Re: Fearing the inevitable
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:37:18 AM AEST
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Very dark and alluring. Well written piece. I look forward to reading more of your work, welcome!
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Re: Fearing the inevitable
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:54:17 AM AEST
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very dark write, you have great expression,
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