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Look In the Mirror & Say You're My Friend
Contributed by
emeraldeyes
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:19:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I seemed to have forgotten who I am,
and do I even give a damn?
My life- I have treated like a joke,
but I give myself no more pity...or hope.
I liked the flame, got off on the burn;
any chance given, I took the wrong turn.
Now, too late, I see what I have caused:
For fun, now I am lost....
in self-inflicted, deadly hurt and confusion,
a sad worried life full of illusion.
Why wasn't I happy with what I had?
Really, life wasn't that bad.
But, now, I can' t even breathe...
just wanting to live is hard to conceive.
I hope to one day wake up again
to look in the mirror and say, You Are My Friend.
Copyright ©
emeraldeyes
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2004-07-28 09:19:05]
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Re: Look In the Mirror & Say You're My Friend
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:23:28 AM AEST
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This is a sad poem but a very good one. It really touches the heart of the reader and conveys the feelings portrayed in a remarkable manor. Very very well put together. I almost feel guilty that I enjoyed it so much, given the particular topic. If you were self inspired, I hope the worst is over & you are now on the mend.
Keep up the work as I hope to read more, because you have great talent. Thanks for sharing, its very much appreciated. Definatly 5/5
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Re: Look In the Mirror & Say You're My Friend
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:56:48 AM AEST
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So sad.
You have conveyed how you feel within so acutely that I feel at a loss for words.
As long as you have a breath within you there is hope. One day you'll look in that mirror and find love for youself, this is my prayer.
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