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Torn
Contributed by
andi
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 08:41:18 AM in AEST
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Wrestling, trying to block
All the feelings I have,
Holding back what should come out,
I hurt you because I hurt.
I see us there,
In the middle of Eden,
that magical place,
And my heart aches.
Its not my family,
But it was my dream,
It will always be
Just out of reach.
Copyright ©
andi
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2004-07-28 08:41:18]
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Re: Torn
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 08:50:15 AM AEST
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wonderfully written. Beautiful piece.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: Torn
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:32:03 AM AEST
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| Well done..Very sad thing to read as well..I hope you can find your Eden somewhere and with someone.. |
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Re: Torn
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:58:25 AM AEST
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written very beautifully and very sad...
great emotions,
pixie xx |
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