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JUst give me one more minute
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 06:57:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Just give me one more minute,
To tell you how I feel,
I’ve loved you since the beginning,
Since then I’ve known it’s real
Just give me one more minute,
In which to say good bye,
I’ll hold my self together,
And just to see me cry,
Just give me one more minute,
To kiss you one last time,
To feel your presence, hold your hand,
with your body next to mine,
Just give me one more minute,
Before you leave for good,
To see your face and touch you’re skin,
And say the things I should,
Just give me one more minute,
Before you reach heavens gate,
For me to stand back and realize,
That crash was all just fate
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2004-07-28 06:57:26]
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Re: JUst give me one more minute
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by Dizza_13 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 07:02:56 AM AEST
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Beautiful. Maybe one day
you'll get that minute
that you want
Dizza
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Re: JUst give me one more minute
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by brew on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:28:05 AM AEST
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| So sad to lose one........but have the feelings of love thats divine. Nice write.! |
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Re: JUst give me one more minute
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:42:03 AM AEST
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| Sad tale, but very good! |
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Re: JUst give me one more minute
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:36:55 AM AEST
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That is such a horrible way to lose a loved one...im soo sry...but this was an amzing write...great job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: JUst give me one more minute
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by baboloki on
Thursday, 25th August 2011 @ 10:38:37 PM AEST
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great imagery i can almost see you say goodbye....goooood
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Re: JUst give me one more minute
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by baboloki on
Thursday, 25th August 2011 @ 10:39:04 PM AEST
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great imagery i can almost see you say goodbye....goooood
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