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The Lonely One
Contributed by
Shanzi
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Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 06:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Why am I so alone?
I love
But I am not loved in return
Why does no one care?
I am a person
The same as you are
Flesh and blood
Controlled by a lonely heart
Always surrounded by people
And yet always alone
No one cares
No one wants to care
Except me
The lonely one.
Copyright ©
Shanzi
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2002-10-28 18:30:00]
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Re: The Lonely One
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by spaceotter on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 06:38:03 PM AEST
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| Nicely put. :) |
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Re: The Lonely One
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by Sandy on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 06:55:10 PM AEST
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| As people we seem to end up in the trap of loneliness as we crave love just for ourselves, I think the secret is to let go and the unexpected usually happens.....I do relate and I am sure lots of others as well... so please dont feel alone |
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Re: The Lonely One
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by Kiz on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 10:42:13 PM AEST
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| I can totally understand this...it's exactly how i always feel. Thanx for sharin babe x |
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Re: The Lonely One
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 11:13:39 AM AEST
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I completely feel this, because of problems in my past i push people away, and for no reason at all, and this really reminds me of my "problem "
Ali |
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Re: The Lonely One
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by ginsdance on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 11:48:06 AM AEST
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I know how this feels.... I tend to be the one left out... because I am not athletic, and I can't play an instrument... and I can't do color guard... and I don't yell ra ra ree and cheerlead... I just write... and in my town... writer's are solitary individuals... just the way the cookie crumbles I guess. I understand... ever need an ear... I've got 2 to lend... :)
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Re: The Lonely One
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by shepdog1972 on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 02:08:48 PM AEST
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i really liked this alot and it has alot of meaning to it .......
we all feel this way some time in our life...
i hope things begin to feel better and that you dont feel so alone
thanks for sharing.......john |
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