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As the night birds sing
Contributed by
nexxa
on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:33:41 AM in AEST
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As the night birds sing, heralding the darkness coming,
I lay myself down in your protective arms.
I am instantly engulfed in the security your very soul radiates.
Our bodies intimately entwine of their own free will.
As we firmly embrace, we look to the blood red sky,
The sun shoots its flames mercilessly upon the unprotected earth.
The land becomes abound with flames, as the heavens release a torrent of violent storms.
A fiery hale pounds relentlessly over our heads, and the earth tears herself asunder.
We were forced to surrender….
We hold each other tenderly while the earth burns to cinder.
Looking longingly into each other’s eyes the sky becomes paralyzed.
With one last loving kiss everything ceases to exist.
Copyright ©
nexxa
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2004-07-28 03:33:41]
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Re: As the night birds sing
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:57:05 AM AEST
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It''s hot!!
It rocks and is such strong emotions, with the passion of the universe.
U definently need to keep doing what ever it is that inspires this.
Five stars.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: As the night birds sing
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 08:04:06 AM AEST
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Poetic masterpiece. I love the line "Looking longingly into each other's eyes the sky becomes paralyzed." A perfectly written love poem.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: As the night birds sing
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:44:14 PM AEST
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| Ah, I remember such beautiful times. So lovingly felt. Marvelous collaboration. |
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Re: As the night birds sing
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by venkat on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 02:11:07 AM AEST
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| captivating..good poem...the night atmosphere was set ablaze..thats the whole enchilada...:-)venkat |
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Re: As the night birds sing
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:19:07 AM AEST
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| very well written but i could never come up with something like that in my mind. that really takes talent, which i don't have in that respect. i can write love poems in rhyme but what you write is much more difficult xx |
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