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unknown
Contributed by
mizzsarah
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:09:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Rain drops trickle as tears do too
Falls ever so slowly when I think of you,
The slow chill, the air that you breathe
Floods around me ever so softly..
Copyright ©
mizzsarah
... [
2004-07-28 03:09:28]
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Re: unknown
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:23:31 AM AEST
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Beautifully written.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: unknown
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:38:20 AM AEST
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May I first use this opportunity to welcome you to YPDC as I have not seen your work before. This poem is truly delighful, it's short but beautifully writen, its just adorable & I enjoyed it very much. I give it 5/5
Thanks for sharing
Corinna |
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Re: unknown
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 10:28:15 PM AEST
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| i can see why some people like this, but i dont have enough showing in this for me to think its worth a 5. i think it needs more substance. |
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