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I spend about a moment
Contributed by
nexxa
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:34:09 AM in AEST
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I spend about a moment wondering what I can do,
To change the path that you seem to choose.
Then I remember why nothing seems to change,
When you are always running away.
You sit there in your little room all-full of fear and rejection.
Never knowing what you crave is right in front of you.
You hate everything around you but it’s your own
Reflection that you can’t face.
You spend everyday in self-recrimination never making any
Difference in your life at all.
You wallow in self-pity till its makes your stomach crawl.
You despise your life, your love, and your law and yet never learn anything at all.
You talk of trust and things you say you know then you turn your back and there you go.
And you wonder what went wrong why you’re all alone and yet the tears never fall it’s as if you never had a soul at all.
You always have big plans that seem to fade and yet you sit in expectation everyday.
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Re: I spend about a moment
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:14:46 AM AEST
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| such people are there..you are thoughtful and your feelings are well expressed. venkat |
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Re: I spend about a moment
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:46:23 PM AEST
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| Some just seem to purposely set themselves up for failure. I don't seem to be able to understand why. |
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Re: I spend about a moment
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:28:53 AM AEST
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| youll have to tell me about this piece more in detail nexxa. an excellent write of example. i see you rhyme sometimes =] you explained this out very well yet keeping the vagueness so people can relate it to themselves and live it in their shoes. you seem to have spoken this as truth as you see it that isnt diluted. writes that are not afraid to express are the writes that live. =] |
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