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Ocean Of Faces
Contributed by
patgspot
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 01:42:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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We're stuck in this rut
Why can't we break free
So many regrets
What we couldn't be
The time we have wasted
We'll never get back
Our lives almost over
And still we're off track
I'm not one to preach
But hear what I say
What will be tomorrow
Is not whats today
Don't think it's just you
Who can't win this game
Theres an ocean of faces
Who feel just the same.
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2004-07-28 01:42:39]
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Re: Ocean Of Faces
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:04:22 AM AEST
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A very powerfull masterpeice!
We all need this one posted somewhere in the house where it can be seen daily.
Five stars!!
smiles, luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Ocean Of Faces
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:14:14 AM AEST
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| very thoughtful..good poem. venkat |
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Re: Ocean Of Faces
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:19:33 AM AEST
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Very true.
Yeah, i agree with emy, this is a wonderful poem. |
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Re: Ocean Of Faces
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 05:23:46 AM AEST
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very good write, but very sad, I am sorry that you were going through this, I hope that things are brighter for you...
pixie xx |
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