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Never Deserved to Live
Contributed by
essentially9
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Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:35:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Never Deserved to Live
Telling you to die
Isn't enough
I'm sick of you living
You lived too much
You don't understand
The feelings I abhor
Against you
How much you disgust me
With everything you say
With every breath you take
Too bad you haven't died this day
No one answered me when I prayed
For your life to be taken away
For you to die this day
You never deserved to live
Thought you were someone
That was in the world for good
But all you ever did
Was bring everyone down
To your own personal Hell
You were here
To make everyone fail
To make them feel miserable
Just for yourself to feel good
I'll not stand down
While you bring me down
I'll not stand by
So you can pass me by
I'll stand up
To bring you down
Where you deserve to stay
For eternity anyway
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essentially9
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2004-07-28 00:35:09]
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Re: Never Deserved to Live
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by nexxa on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 01:04:20 AM AEST
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very nice wee one and a little step away from some of your other work I like this alot it is very angry yet you kept true to form.
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Re: Never Deserved to Live
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 01:11:53 AM AEST
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Oh! E9.... my initial reaction was "Ouch". Yeh... it's angry. But angry can be good... for the write but also for theraputic purposes. You pain bleeds through here and your anger is well expressed. I like the ending most of all... it's a "So there!" of sorts. Nicely done!
Thanks for sharing this.... I hope it 'helped',
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Re: Never Deserved to Live
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 05:26:26 AM AEST
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wow this is filled with anger, but as SNM said anger can be good as it is a very healthy emotion., I must be brimming with health then lololol
great write,
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Re: Never Deserved to Live
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:07:04 PM AEST
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How indignant this write seems to be! Taking a stand is a good idea though......I enjoyed reading this although I don't know the reason why!
Thank you for sharing
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