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The Way You Make Me Feel
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:46:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There are so many things about you
and The Way You Make Me Feel
Not from just your natural beauty
or your tremendous sex appeal
You light up my life daily
making living a pure delight
From the time you awake in the morning
until we go to sleep at night
How many people in the world
are as lucky as I am dear
Who look forward to every minute
and the slow passing of each year
Being near to you my darling
or just watching what you do
No matter what it is
I fall more in love with you
There is not a day that goes by
or a minute that is not real
In our life together sweetheart
and The Way You Make Me Feel
Copyright ©
Bruce
... [
2004-07-27 23:46:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Way You Make Me Feel
(User Rating: 1 ) by nexxa on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 01:46:27 AM AEST (User
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Ahh Bruce you have done it again
how do you keep doing that? lol
Your poems are what every girl wants from the man they love and yet again I am taken by them as well :)
nicely done and I think I am gonna show them to hubby so he can see what a guy should be writting lmao
Thank you for your words.
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Re: The Way You Make Me Feel
(User Rating: 1 ) by srsuckow on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:06:10 AM AEST (User
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Oh my goodness, absolutely beautiful! You evoke emotion and a genuine smile. Thank you! |
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Re: The Way You Make Me Feel
(User Rating: 1 ) by WinterFawn on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:34:01 AM AEST (User
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Beautifully romantic. Pure love is portrayed honestly and openly in this verse. Awesome piece.
WinterFawn |
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