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Pink Rose
Contributed by
Jennette_The_Poet
on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:10:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You gave me a rose today
a rose that had its own beauty
it had a smell like a summer rain
it was a nice soft pink rose
a rose of friendship, I said
It's something I would hold close
Close to my heart as friend would do.
All You could do was look me into my
eyes, as I sat there and smelled this beautiful
Rose.
You had a single tear fall from your cheek
as you stood up and took me by my hand
All you could do was cry, you knew I was
Not well, You knew I was just about ready to
Die. I asked you what is wrong my friend?
All you could do was say nothing as you
shook you're head no. I placed this pink
beautiful rose on the table and took your
hand, as we slowly danced to this
Song. I am thankful to have you as my friend
I could not have anyone, who could be
Any better, then you. As I placed my head
on you're shoulder, I heard you whisper something
Into my ear, I said 'What was that?" Then you said it
once again, and here is what you said "Please don't go"
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Re: Pink Rose
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:07:55 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.... thank you for sharing your thoughts with us..This brought back some lovely memories for me....
Jenni |
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Re: Pink Rose
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by lady-quiet-dreamer on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 08:48:51 PM AEST
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| it touched me, so beautiful and so moving and i agree "please don't go" |
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Re: Pink Rose
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Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 08:49:02 PM AEST
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| it touched me, so beautiful and so moving and i agree "please don't go" |
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Re: Pink Rose
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th December 2007 @ 05:57:01 AM AEST
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| awww, this was a really touching poem. thanks for sharing it. |
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