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No Feeling Left
Contributed by
iluvpencils
on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 09:31:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I watch the blood appear
My life slowly emerging
My heart jumps
That thin, neat line
Echoes everything inside me
I don't cry...
I don't feel pain
All feeling left
Such a long, long time ago
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2004-07-27 21:31:28]
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Re: No Feeling Left
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by waos on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 09:51:30 PM AEST
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| i can relate to that, i hope you start feeling better soon (i'm sorry words are so empty) |
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Re: No Feeling Left
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 04:27:59 AM AEST
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this grips to my head hard. many times i have had these thoughts...
brilliant poem.
i like it where you put
"My heart jumps
That thin, neat line". |
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