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I dont understand...
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 08:33:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I don't understand you,
I had you now, and I have a reason.
Always ignored,
trying to control me,
always leaving...
never there...
painful words I don't understand why?
So I push away you and the pain,
cold my heart grows to a dieing friendship.
Up comes the wall once more,
while behind I die slowly.
Clueless to the pain you cause,
you can't understand.
So behind the wall I will stay.
To die and hide my fears away.
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2004-07-27 20:33:09]
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Re: I dont understand...
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 08:38:21 PM AEST
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"Up comes the wall once more,
while behind I die slowly.
Clueless to the pain you cause"
great lines... this calls out to me because I totally know what your trying to say. I can relate completely. (as usuall) great work! A++++ |
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Re: I dont understand...
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by waos on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 09:56:36 PM AEST
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| it's good imagery with you behind a wall. i feel bad that your friend is not so much a friend anymore. that sucks. i hope you can deal with it, as they say "time heals all wounds" eh? |
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