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Warring over self intentions
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
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Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 08:24:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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you know one day i'll be free
from all of this
i'll break your chains
your bondage of me will be just a figment
because i am me and you are not
you may be a part of me
but guess what
the time has come
for me to conquer
if you want war
the you have already lost
and i have won
soon.
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Re: Warring over self intentions
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 08:27:10 PM AEST
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| ahh timeless struggle... interesting word selection. I hope that things have been well and I hope that you are able to overcome your struggle. great poem very strong. A++++ |
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Re: Warring over self intentions
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:06:59 PM AEST
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the struggle between the two sucks...its hard to conquer it on your own but you are strong and I know for sure that you have won or will win if your still left battling in that war...
please comment on my work too
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