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My Loyal Mighty Oak Tree.
Contributed by
Gentledove
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Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 05:57:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Strong as an oak tree, you stand by my side,
Your branches uplift me, They're my guide.
They hold me tight against strife and tide,
On these branches, I have relied.
Your roots of commitment planted deep and solid,
Withstanding storms that may have flooded.
Carrying nutrients of trust have sprouted.
A love so strong it can't be uprooted.
Your trunk of stability enduring the seasons,
Weathering the storms of strife and unreason,
Allowing the leaves of your love to blossom,
Encompassing me in your never ending passion.
Copyright ©
Gentledove
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2004-07-27 17:57:49]
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Re: My Loyal Mighty Oak Tree.
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by Thunderwolf on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 06:49:59 PM AEST
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Thank you babe for this wonderful write. I love you.
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Re: My Loyal Mighty Oak Tree.
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 08:42:25 PM AEST
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This is one of the best poems I've read tonight... The analogy is superb and it is so well written... The pic is alo so beautiful...
Thank you, Dove for sharing this.....
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Re: My Loyal Mighty Oak Tree.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 09:47:07 PM AEST
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What a wonderful tribute to the man you love. It seems to be that you both have excellent tastes in lifelong mates. You did him proud, Gay.
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Re: My Loyal Mighty Oak Tree.
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 06:06:11 AM AEST
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Awwwwww this is beautiful, I hope that you and Thunderwolf will be happy forever
pixie xx |
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Re: My Loyal Mighty Oak Tree.
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:11:49 PM AEST
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I just love trees Gentledove, with a heart filled with love.......and this poem was splendid indeed to compare the man you love to a steady Oak! It would seem he is very steady, and a wonderful person to stand by you.....I lov ed the way you compared the parts of the tree......the branches, the roots etc. Very well done.....and loving, and lovely too!
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Re: My Loyal Mighty Oak Tree.
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:07:55 AM AEST
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sooo beautiful....... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: My Loyal Mighty Oak Tree.
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by WinterFawn on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:46:21 AM AEST
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Very beautiful verse of love and committment. You are a very talented writer and you express yourself wonderfully in your poems. Great piece.
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