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Little Village
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 05:06:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The sun is shinning
a new day begins
time to get ready
to do
the same ol thing again,
dress to impress
get in my car
while i'm at work
dream of being a star.
I hear the towns clock
It must be 12
In 5 more hours
I'll be released from this hell,
here i must endure
local soap operas and gossip
I keep my mouth shut
but
I don't like it.
I'm driving down a road
that i know to well
can't seem to escape
stuck in this routine
where i dwell,
at night
I rock and roll
I hip and hop
sometimes i lose control
and don't know when to stop.
I toss I turn
somehow I made it home
I hear a maon I am not alone
and I am sure
I've done this before,
The stars are shinnig
like the are suppose to
I'll keep my mouth shut
cause I don't know what to do.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2004-07-27 17:06:35]
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Re: Little Village
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 06:27:09 PM AEST
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| i liked it. i especially like how you started it out, it really caught my attention. |
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Re: Little Village
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:18:15 AM AEST
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Good work.
I'm sure many, many can relate.
Me eeither but bet i could think of something.
smiles, huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Little Village
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by tabby on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 03:37:31 PM AEST
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i like it. keep it up!
Laura
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