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What do I feel
Contributed by
Lost_Shadow
on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 05:03:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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People think they know me,
Know what I have gone through
Times change,
But people don't,
Only thinking they can be of help
Torment and torture of other peoples souls
Delivered by one another to inflict,
Oh I don't know
All I know is I thrive on what they create.
I begin to feel more alive
Knowing they are hurting, hating, angering
The stronger I become the less emotions I feel
Everyone saying I have been hurt in the past
Making me laugh as they know not of whats in my mind
Psychological threats, theoritical trauma
I know not how to be hurt, nor can I pretend
So if everyone can stop saying that I am feeling something I am not
And try being true with themselves.
They say they are in love, when only they are obssessed
They say they are in love, when all they want to do is control
Filling up no space, or empty darkness, but pure pain
Regretting in the end, trying to make themselves whole
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Re: What do I feel
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 06:25:04 PM AEST
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| powerful. i really liked how you ended it, it was an awesome ending, keep on writing! |
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Re: What do I feel
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by brew on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 07:46:27 PM AEST
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| I can relate.........people know me, but the ones who say i love you ....hmmmmmmm they do but I want the ones who love and who are in LOVE....................nice writing |
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Re: What do I feel
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 06:08:15 AM AEST
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very powerful piece of writing,
pixie xx |
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Re: What do I feel
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 08:44:46 AM AEST
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Very good advice. I liked how you wrote this poem like you were talking to us, trying to tell us what you've been through. I like this poem alot. Great write!
Kimberly |
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