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Do you understand me?
Contributed by
GEQUETSCHT
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Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
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Do you see me
Do you hear me
Do you feel me
Do you understand me
I dont understand you
I want to disturb the peace
I want to see your hands
I want to be understood
I want to be satisfied
Can you see me
Can you hear me
Can you feel me
Can you understand me
I dont understand you
I want to be alone
I want to be felt
I want your energy
I want your fantasy
Could you see me
Could you hear me
Could you Feel me
Could you undertand me
I dont understand you
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2002-10-28 15:00:00]
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Re: Do you understand me?
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by Kiz on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 10:47:05 PM AEST
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Re: Do you understand me?
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by Daniel on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 06:07:47 AM AEST
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| i don't really know you, so fer now i won't answer that. but i love the simple few words in this, there doesn't need to be more in it. it's not a big complicated mess, i LIKE IT!! kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: Do you understand me?
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by Shanzi on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 08:03:26 AM AEST
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| I really like this. I know how it feels cuz I feel like no one understands me at all. The repetition of rhetorical questions are really good. Kudos! |
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Re: Do you understand me?
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by rockshv on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 01:16:40 PM AEST
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good writing..not too many ppl can make repetitive words sound good...
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kita |
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