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My Love I'll Meet
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 03:19:01 PM in AEST
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While in my bed
In slumber sweet
I walk in sunshine
My love to meet
Over mountain
Through forest glade
My path I walk
Her dreams to invade
In Dreamland then
I find my Love
My heart now soars
Through clouds above
To every dream
There is an end
In every path
Always a bend
The end of this
In dreams set free
I will awake
And her I'll see
There will I stay
Wrapped in her arms
Forever more
Wrapped in her charms
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Re: My Love I'll Meet
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 03:20:48 PM AEST
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Yes Emily, another silly love poem...
Oh well. Mayhaps the next one will be better.
Take care, all.
I hope you enjoy.
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Re: My Love I'll Meet
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by faith_my_eyes on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 03:31:16 PM AEST
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LOL! That comment was for ME David? Not a silly love poem. Rather, it is enchanting. Perhaps I am just basking in love right now ;-)
God bless
Em |
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Re: My Love I'll Meet
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 03:34:40 PM AEST
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Cute write...
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Re: My Love I'll Meet
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by tiny_mo on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 04:18:52 PM AEST
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very cute poem. I loved it. It was as if I was with my ver special person right now. Keep writing about ur happiness.
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Re: My Love I'll Meet
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 04:57:17 PM AEST
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David, you two are increasingly adorable.
I hope to one day meet the pair of you just so I can see the happiness in your eyes. You're too cute. This poem is SO lovely and sweet. No wonder Carrie's so enamored.
Lots of LOVE and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: My Love I'll Meet
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 01:12:48 AM AEST
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Beautiful work, direct and well written.
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Re: My Love I'll Meet
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:53:29 PM AEST
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beautifully sweet, sooo precious:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: My Love I'll Meet
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 10:44:32 PM AEST
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My turn to roll eyes and gasp for fresh air...
Please, David!!!
*loses consciousness*
*regains consciousness*
Is it GONE yet?
Hmm. I think the line "her dreams to invade" is, well, it reminds me of the frightful grin, that's all. I would have put it differently.
Crazy boy. Ah well. Nice piece, I suppose.
You-know-who |
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Re: My Love I'll Meet
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by Tanmaya on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 03:11:38 AM AEST
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Very sweet-sounding.
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Re: My Love I'll Meet
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by eatfresh22 on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 12:35:51 PM AEST
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Awe...David. I really liked this one. (as I do all of the ones you write) Never mind Andrew's silly comments. He's just a child, and does not understand things as deep as love. I thought it had good imagery, and I could see your face. I love you, too.
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Re: My Love I'll Meet
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by anitajames on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 02:27:48 PM AEST
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What a wonderful gift to dream of love and to wake with it as well. Great poem.
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