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°°°Make me your angel°°°
Contributed by
OreO
on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 02:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Make me your angel, come dance with me
Let's dance real slow, and spread our wings
I want to dance on clouds of true love
And watch the world from up above
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Make me your angel, put me in your wings
Lift me up high, lean into me and sing
I want to fly around rainbows bright
And be your angel by day and night
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Make me your angel, say you love me
Let's watch over the world, just you and me
We can guard all the children who have no home
And shelter them when on the streets they roam
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Make me your angel, show me the way
Let's comfort the elder as they pray
We can help the mother's and fathers so tired
And the love you show them, i will admire
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Make me your angel, show me the way
Let's help the abused, take their scars away
Let's spread angel dust upon their lives
Grandparents, kids, husbands and wives
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Make me your angel, make my spirit fly
Today is the day to make things right
If angel i was not meant to be
Then save my life, and watch over me
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-10-28 14:40:00]
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Re: °°°Make me your angel°°°
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 03:11:37 PM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem ... with a lovely message. Great write. |
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Re: °°°Make me your angel°°°
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by Sandy on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 07:00:08 PM AEST
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| Lovely words. Yes I am one of those people who tend to get involved and Have come to realise that even if you touch just a fraction of all the troubles in the world you do make a difference. |
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Re: °°°Make me your angel°°°
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by spaceotter on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 08:29:44 PM AEST
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| Great and beautiful poem Oreo. It's an easy read and gets the message across well. |
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Re: °°°Make me your angel°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 11:29:08 PM AEST
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Again well done OREO! I really love to read about angels, I colect them! Just beautiful!
Christina |
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Re: °°°Make me your angel°°°
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by fancyface4898 on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 03:34:44 AM AEST
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| This is a lovely poem and very well writen you have found away to make the reader feel as though you are talking to and about them. It was troughly a joy to read |
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Re: °°°Make me your angel°°°
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 04:04:33 AM AEST
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| Such a beautiful thought...expressed perfectly. Well done! :o) Larry |
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Re: °°°Make me your angel°°°
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by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 06:25:01 PM AEST
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| i can really relate to this, i wish some one would take my scars away, but thats impossible.... |
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Re: °°°Make me your angel°°°
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by nomad on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 11:46:52 AM AEST
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| A beautiful write, OreO. Very emotional, vivid, sweet. You are an angel. |
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