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Victimized
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 02:59:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Victimized
You tell me
To dry my eyes
Then you walk away
Like I never cried
That it was my fault besides
That I was the one that lied
That you were victimized
In all of the lies
All of the blame isn't mine
You were the cause
Of all the times that I cried
You were the one that lied
And both of us deny
Saying we're right
In every fight
You tell me
To dry my eyes
To never again lie
That you were victimized
And that you are dying
Because of me
I can't see
The truth behind
My closed eyes
I can't see
That you were victimized
Because of me
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Re: Victimized
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 03:08:52 PM AEST
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| I like the perspective considering both characters' feelings. Nice write--the Moth |
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Re: Victimized
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:28:36 AM AEST
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| This reminds me of something..Hmm..Your flow here is amazing and the verses are even better..You can take any topic and make it simply Yours..Perhaps that is why I can talk to you so well..Kindrid spirts and all that.. |
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