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That Moment
Contributed by
Baronhawk
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Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 01:29:06 PM in AEST
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A second before now,
A minute after then,
How can you ever know,
That magic moment when.
All things fall into place,
When she walks into view,
My world spins in a daze,
My heart beats all askew.
Is it that lovely face,
Or that sweet sweet smell of her,
That lovely voice that says,
"Hello" as if a purr.
Before I never knew,
But now I always dream,
No one can be as you,
As perfect as I deem.
Is love truly as blind,
For indeed I have seen more,
But all that my heart now finds,
Is your face that I adore.
How can I define,
This love that sparks in turn,
Is this that tale through time,
The love that ever burns.
What fate has bound to me,
That moment when fate has willed,
A dream of what could be,
A hope that finds me still.
Whenever it came by,
Whatever is the cause,
It's too late to wonder why,
Once happened I am lost.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2004-07-27 13:29:06]
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Re: That Moment
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 01:33:55 PM AEST
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A very special moment indeed!
By your comment it would seem that things didn't work out, but don't close the door!
Good flow and well done! |
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Re: That Moment
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by WinterFawn on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 02:01:52 PM AEST
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What a rush that feeling is!...this is an awesome verse that tells of that breathless moment. Beautifully written.
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Re: That Moment
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by BrandySwanson on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 02:50:05 PM AEST
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beautiful just beautiful great job.
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Re: That Moment
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 09:52:03 PM AEST
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| Yes, it is a moment that lives in memory forever. It may be just in the past now, but love is always waiting for you when you least expect it. You will have another 'moment'. Maybe not exactly the same, but another you will never forget. |
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Re: That Moment
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by venkat on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 05:09:34 AM AEST
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| such sweet magical moments ever occur in our lives..beautifully written.. venkat |
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Re: That Moment
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 06:50:46 PM AEST
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beautiful in style, flow and well woven words, very sweet too:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: That Moment
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 08:18:45 PM AEST
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I never see you here anymore so I was delighted to see that you had posted again!
Your poem is beautiful and wistful.
Baron you live in a exotic locale in a place full of beautiful women. It can happen again and i'm going to send strong wishes your way that you find the happiness you deserve.
Hope and faith can take you a long way if you will only believe.
Keep writing!
Kie |
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