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This Is A Dream I have.
Contributed by
Baronhawk
on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 12:45:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If forever was to be,
If tomorrow never comes,
I would sought you for me,
To embrace what love becomes.
Forever is for naught,
Tomorrow is ever here,
In vain is all I sought,
A dream it is, I fear.
If only I was more,
If only you were mine,
No matter what remorse,
For your love I would forfend.
But I am only me,
And you are ever more,
What hopes may ever be,
Are but dew drops in the snow.
If tales are ever true,
If acts changes no course,
What fate would have construed,
What paths might we have crossed.
Alas tales just passes on,
All things are bound in turn,
Never ever will dreams be borne,
Only in the bosom of slumber's return.
If only for a while,
If ever fate is kind,
My heart does ever cry,
For that bliss I will never find.
This is a dream I have,
It is a hope that never wakes,
This is a tale I craft,
A vision I can never partake.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2004-07-27 12:45:53]
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Re: This Is A Dream I have.
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 01:09:40 PM AEST
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| "I've come to take what is mine, Father." I've seen Excalibur many times. As for the poem, I was suprised, it's very well done.--the Moth |
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Re: This Is A Dream I have.
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:16:58 AM AEST
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I was a fan of yours Baronhawk from the very first poem you submitted. I've read every single poem you have ever submitted on this site and the more you write the more your talent shines.
You will find love again and that love will help you to forget the hurt of the past. That is what love does.
You do write beautiful words, as always.
Kie |
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Re: This Is A Dream I have.
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by venkat on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 05:16:16 AM AEST
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| wonderful..it is a captivating write. venkat |
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