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dying lust
Contributed by
kandyklown999
on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 12:14:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sleep, sleep eternaly my love.
Weep, weep tears are not enough.
Live my joy, die my sarrow.
For I kno you'll return tomorrow.
Leave me pain, come back my trust.
I'll miss you so my dying lust.
Copyright ©
kandyklown999
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2004-07-27 12:14:56]
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Re: dying lust
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 12:19:33 PM AEST
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wow, very powerful wirte for such a short verse
bravo
pixie xx |
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Re: dying lust
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by shorty_52 on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 12:29:18 PM AEST
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that's interesting. writen very good. keep up the good work.
~allyson~ |
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Re: dying lust
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 01:13:08 PM AEST
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| Captivating rhyme. If you could put these up in some kind of crayon font that would be a nice touch I think, what with your name and creative spelling.--Mothy |
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Re: dying lust
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by ilovelillbj on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 10:54:16 AM AEST
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says a lot in a short few lines, i really like it!
x Sarah x |
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