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past's lake
Contributed by
kammie
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Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:52:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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at night i lie awake
thinking about pasts lake
ghost stories flowing into a river
chilling stories that make me shiver
but when i was younger
for ghost stories i had a hunger
where they ever true or not
can you tell me ,i forgot
stories that make me quiver inside
un-dead things that can hide
all flowing through the lake of past
where we all end up
Copyright ©
kammie
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2004-07-27 11:52:06]
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Re: past's lake
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by WinterFawn on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 12:15:18 PM AEST
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Chilling verse kammie!...I love a good ghost story too...great job with this.
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Re: past's lake
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 12:20:59 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this write.... very good poem Kammie,
pixie xx |
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Re: past's lake
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by shorty_52 on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 12:35:32 PM AEST
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this was an enjoyable read. not very long but full of detail. good write. keep up the good work.
~allyson~ |
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Re: past's lake
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by candysears on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 08:59:38 PM AEST
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This was a great ghost story...
Really enjoyed reading it..God Bless! |
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