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Fire Behind My Eyes
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:28:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
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There is fire behind my eyes,
My love for you will never die,
Passion & love burns deep,
One that is mine for keeps.
It blazes eternally inside,
A feeling I don’t wish to hide,
Feelings of love should be shown,
I want my rapture to be well known.
My fondness increases each new day,
I have many beautiful things to portray,
Fireflies dance around in my mind,
This warmth is for only you to find.
The intensity of my fire is red hot
It knows just how to hit my spot,
I cry tears of sheer ,utter blessedness,
This love is one to forever caress.
I am consumed by my inferno,
Letting my fiery storm blow,
Soldering your name over my core,
A true feeling I will never abhor.
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pixie
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2004-07-27 11:28:38]
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Re: Fire Behind My Eyes
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:37:51 AM AEST
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Fireflies dance around in my mind,
Soldering your name over my core,
Wow.
You really know how to spice things up. These picturesque rhymes are really very passionate and I love the way everything just seems to roll off the tongue or tumble out of the pen.
Beautiful, once again.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea
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Re: Fire Behind My Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 12:27:23 PM AEST
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i love that image of fire flys dancing around in my mind, good tight poetry well done.
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Re: Fire Behind My Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 01:56:06 PM AEST
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pixie! Very passionate and yes I have to say it...Firey!
You've done a great job with this one, your emotion comes through strongly and yet is well focused.
Great Job! |
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Re: Fire Behind My Eyes
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by Sagacious on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 02:21:00 PM AEST
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| Longing may constitute a sweet sorrow, but this fire of which you speak--may it blaze in you, white-hot, so long as you may write! It is your life's blood, clearly, and is to be protected at all cost. I agree with the poster who singled out the line "soldering your name over my core," for it represents the soul of this poem. Surely, your words have been soldered over my mind, and I will look forward to reading more! -KAC- |
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Re: Fire Behind My Eyes
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by BrandySwanson on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 02:56:57 PM AEST
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very passionate & sweet I liked it.
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Re: Fire Behind My Eyes
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:12:32 AM AEST
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So much passion and emotions....
well done.......You express this poem so well.. |
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Re: Fire Behind My Eyes
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 01:29:46 AM AEST
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| sweet, passionate and fiery..lovely..venkat |
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Re: Fire Behind My Eyes
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by WinterFawn on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 07:51:44 AM AEST
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Passion blazes in this verse pixie!..awesome write!
WinterFawn***** |
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Re: Fire Behind My Eyes
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:52:37 PM AEST
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~:*beautiful*:~ hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Fire Behind My Eyes
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:54:25 AM AEST
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U go now.
U got it going on no one can ever doubt this strong, beautifull, heavenly write!
five stars
Awesome!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
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Re: Fire Behind My Eyes
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by SweetRhythm on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 09:43:53 AM AEST
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This poem is 'roaring with devotion' & 'love'. I really enjoyed it. It really highlights your talent. So sweet & touching, what lovely sentiments by one.
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Re: Fire Behind My Eyes
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by pvd on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 09:36:19 AM AEST
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Love is always a hot topic. This is a smoking piece. I get the sence that if one plays with fire one might get burned. Ouch, I can't believe I said that. Your true feelings laid bare again. Good write.
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