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begging to be pushed
Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:25:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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despreatly waiting for nothing at all
desperatly waiting
rocking back and forth
staring through these blood stained walls
despratly craving my own demise
despreatly craving for this button to be pushed
push this button push me over the edge
end this ***** cruelty
i don't want to fight to exist
desperatly needing your lies
despreatly waiting for the final scene
despratly waiting for you to say it,ll be over soon
desp[eratly trying to open my eyes
despratly trying to breath but i can't even try
i bvelive yu when u said it will all b o.k
you promised you would never leave me
despreatly trying to find an answer in these four blood stained walls
despreatly waiting for something that is more than nothing at all
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2004-07-27 11:25:32]
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Re: begging to be pushed
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:34:15 AM AEST
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emotional and angry write, I could feel your rawness through your words :(
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: begging to be pushed
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by bttrflynajar on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 06:41:26 PM AEST
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| this really captures a feeling, and i am starting to wonder if you are really ok? maybe you should seek help, before you hurt yourself anymore. (if these poems are an accurate account of your feelings) your a great writer, hang in there, one day you'll be able to breathe again. |
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