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Blowing In The Wind
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:25:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A single, lonely blade of glass,
Standing in the world that’s so vast,
Being blown from side to side,
With no-where to run & hide.
Taking all the wind & the rain,
Along with the weather comes the strain,
Bending over but never giving in,
Still managing to bear it & grin.
Resistance builds with the ages,
It gets easier to lift the heavy pages,
Beginning to run after the walk,
Learning to shout after the talk.
Forever like this we can stand,
Swaying to & fro in this open land,
Being defiant in the face of hurt,
Never bowing down into the dirt.
We are all alone in our world,
Witnesses to futures as they unfurl,
Standing tall & feeling brave,
Not letting woe see us into a shallow grave.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-27 11:25:31]
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Re: Blowing In The Wind
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by kammie on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:32:40 AM AEST
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it was a great right pixie! i think your a wonderful poet hope your ok and hope you and mark are happy together
thanks for commenting on my poems
xxxkises*xx kammie |
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Re: Blowing In The Wind
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:33:42 AM AEST
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Beautiful. A wonderful concept to portray and you've portrayed it ever so delicately. I really like this one, pixie. Bravo!
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Blowing In The Wind
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by Schnikes13 on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:38:01 AM AEST
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Great write!
I could totally envision your words! |
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Re: Blowing In The Wind
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:39:38 AM AEST
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Wow, perfect.
I love the idea of us all being blades of grass. lol
Dont worry...gales may blow, but we will stay rooted deep.
Great write,
Phil xxx |
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Re: Blowing In The Wind
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by katyqueen35 on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:50:08 AM AEST
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Very well written poem....
A single, lonely blade of glass,
Standing in the world that’s so vast,
Being blown from side to side,
With no-where to run & hide.
such details.
you are very talented..keep writing.......
hugs |
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Re: Blowing In The Wind
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by brew on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:50:56 AM AEST
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Wonderful write, how the grass is blowing by its self.......Well sometimes we feel like that, but in all we have things that keep us together. It takes sun and rain to keep tha grass, and it takes love and happiness for us.
Again, very nice writing! |
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Re: Blowing In The Wind
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 12:30:45 PM AEST
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you have a wonderful gift for visual imagery, excellent.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Blowing In The Wind
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by shorty_52 on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 12:41:07 PM AEST
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beautifully writen. u made everything make sense in a lot of ways. this is a wonderful poem. good job. keep up the good work.
~allyson~ |
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Re: Blowing In The Wind
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:56:50 AM AEST
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I was very impressed with this poem Pixie.
It is definitely publishable and you should submit it.
Wonderful job you have done. : )
Kie |
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Re: Blowing In The Wind
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:49:54 PM AEST
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i love this poem, yeah, im a blade of grass, and when i feel tall, someone always comes around w/ the mower..... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Blowing In The Wind
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:49:56 AM AEST
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five star
Very awesome, powerfull, masterpeice!
Great write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Blowing In The Wind
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by SweetRhythm on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 06:17:21 AM AEST
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Hey pix wat a powerful piece of work. Very well put together & gives us all food for thought. Once again another enjoyed piece of work from yourself.
Corinna |
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Re: Blowing In The Wind
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by MDodgen on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 02:51:43 PM AEST
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Taking all the wind & the rain,
Along with the weather comes the strain,
Bending over but never giving in,
Still managing to bear it & grin.
i'm speechless. your imagery overpowers me again pixie. 5 stars |
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Re: Blowing In The Wind
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by little_genna on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 06:38:40 AM AEST
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| so true |
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Re: Blowing In The Wind
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 12:12:02 AM AEST
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| Such a great poem! While I was reading it I could see it all in my head. A great write keep it up! |
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Re: Blowing In The Wind
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 02:17:53 PM AEST
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I am apart of everything
Everyone
Somewhere deeply seeded
Is a connection I can't see
So I am me by myself
All alone
Side by side |
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