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i,m sorry daddy
Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
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Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 10:37:51 AM in AEST
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my head aches and my wrists are bleeding
all thoughts are blurred
loosing all feeling
these 4 walls for a moment feel peaceful
and whne i,m gone you can't hurt me anymore
mummy i,m sorry you hurt me one times to many
this blade looks so pretty
as i cut my bloody wrists again
these thoughts are so ugly
why was i so stupid to let you back in
you said you wanted to explain
why you caused me so much pain
so i istened but it wasnt what i wanted to hear
just another sob story
but no answers no shame no sorry just more blame
this guilt has grown heavier by the day
i cannot do this anymore
and i will not say i,m sorry
as i take my last breath
as i watch my blood run
i finally dont feel this guilt anymore
feel likei have killed some1
but its you that has done the crime
all your lies have resulted in your dearest duaghters suicide
i left a note on the floor next to me for my daddy
i never felt loved but he said he did love me
i gave it my all but i just didnt have any fight left
daddy i,m sorry that i had to leave
i,m so sorry you had to see me like this
scarred in life scarred in death
i,m sorry daddy i never wanted this
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Re: i,m sorry daddy
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 10:42:32 AM AEST
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wow, this is so sad and it really touched me.. *hugs* you poor thing, I know how you feel...... I hope that you feel better soon hun,
takecare
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Re: i,m sorry daddy
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by Monkeybones99 on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 10:42:56 AM AEST
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| I know that some people just write out of thier pain but I hope if your feeling this bad you have someone to turn too this poem I would like to say is the first I've read on here that made me cry please if you need a friend keep my name in mind. |
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Re: i,m sorry daddy
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by bttrflynajar on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 06:38:42 PM AEST
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| very good write, explains just the feeling when someone wont just say im sorry. and thats all that you want from them, but instead you get more blame and guilt, even though you know in you heart you were the one who was truly right. |
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Re: i,m sorry daddy
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 12:05:49 AM AEST
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This is a seriously powerful poem. I really enjoyed the intensity of this.
Keep up the good work!
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