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How to be Fast ''In Park'
Contributed by
norm
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Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 08:31:10 AM in AEST
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A guy met a girl at a bar,
The guy asked the girl to his car,
Without turning a wheel
Of his automobile,
The guy and the girl went too far.
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Re: How to be Fast ''In Park'
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by Psyche on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 09:09:44 AM AEST
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Norm,
After reading some of your poems in the forum, I can honestly say - you bring lots and lots of smiles to my face. (er.. not all at once, mind you!) LOL. This was equally charming! Thank You! |
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Re: How to be Fast ''In Park'
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 10:26:44 AM AEST
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You are taking me back several years
to dark dead-ends and bright flashlight fears
I'm glad that I'm done with those days
Yes, older is better I'd say
Now we're revved to a much higher gear!
Stitch |
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Re: How to be Fast ''In Park'
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 12:43:48 PM AEST
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Well first of all let me say......it's hard to follow an act like that of Stitch........she is great, almost greater than the author of the poem....ooopppssss, I'm sorry I'm suppose to stay positive, and so I will.
I have a question: After they went too far....then what? If they can do that so easily in Park......can you just imagine what would happen in a higher gear? in the car, in the rear? You're going to get in alot of trouble!!!
Really funnnnnnnnnyyyyyyyyyyNorm.....you missed your calling...'tis a stand up comic
you should have been.......whole crowds you would have entertained........and just think of the fame?
lovya.....not bad for a blind man that can't see!
Notice the double whamy? Oxy is well!!!
teehee
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