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Feelings
Contributed by
Kazzy1231
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Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 06:33:11 AM in AEST
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I feel lonely.
But there's people all around.
I feel lost.
But I know where I am.
I feel upset but I'm not sure why.
All I know is I want 2 die.
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Kazzy1231
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2004-07-27 06:33:11]
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Re: Feelings
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by Monkeybones99 on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 10:39:14 AM AEST
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| Well I don't know that it will help but be sure to know your not the only one that feels this way.This poem is short but to the point. Good write. |
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Re: Feelings
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by Pyrofungus on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 07:48:58 PM AEST
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Your poems are so short but get the point across like a slap in the face....great job...i can relate to this all to well...feeling lost...and lonely...we know where we are we can see whats in front of us yet were still lost...and all of this loneliness that consumes us with everyone around makes us even more lost in this world...we can't take life anymore so all were looking for is a way out...awesome poem bro awesome!
please comment on my work too
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