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Lost and Unsure...
Contributed by
eternal_angel_2004
on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 05:04:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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my world is
s-l-o-w-l-y
c
r
a
s
h
i
n
g,
the lights
are growing
d i m.
reality d r i f t i n g
further
away,
s-l-o-w-l-y
releasing me
from its grip.
the words
begin to blur,
as my eyes
fill
with
tears.
nothing. makes. sense.
sense. means. nothing.
does anyone
u
n
d
e
r
s
t
a
n
d
? ? ?
does anyone even
c-a-r-e
? ? ?
the scars show
where i’ve been.
the pain
too
hard
to
bear.
feelings
l-o-c-k-e-d
hidden
behind
the m-a-s-k
of pain,
s
o
r
r
o
w
depression.
lies
deceit.
all become normalcy.
normal.
ha. ha.ha. ha…
what is normal anymore?
certainly not i.
no, not i.
definitely
not
me…
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... [
2004-07-27 05:04:44]
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Re: Lost and Unsure...
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 06:32:08 AM AEST
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This sounds like something a friend of mine would write.....
Good write..
Jenni |
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Re: Lost and Unsure...
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 04:49:05 PM AEST
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Interesting and apt format for the poem I think.
I guess depression is something that people think they understand when the only people that really understand are the people who have suffered it too.
Thx for the insight and hope you conquer it.
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