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What is what is?
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 11:56:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A payed hell.
A cold cell.
To many pills.
One to many to breath.
One to many ways to bleed.
Theres too much anger inside me.
Hanging on by a wire.
Staying close to hells fire.
Trying to obtain your desire.
Lets go.
A long trip.
All alone in the dark.
With this psark.
May I plague your life.
Take your life.
Do you justice.
Laws are written and said.
I find comfort in my wet bed.
Like a child with a brand new sled.
One to many thoughts running through your head.
What is death.
What is true love.
what is what is.
Faded lines out to pasture.
Goats and cattle graze.
Then this black haze veils.
The world wrapped in its unholy veil.
For what is isnt what is at all.
But in fact what is isnt everything.
Now is it.
Copyright ©
Mortis-Dark
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2004-07-26 23:56:44]
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Re: What is what is?
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by AsILayDying on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 12:56:54 AM AEST
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| I thought this was good, you should write alot more |
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Re: What is what is?
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 01:20:36 AM AEST
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| Wow. |
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Re: What is what is?
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:43:58 AM AEST
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Yes, this was good. You should write more... you have potential to be really good. There could be an edit through here to make it better... a few misspellings and stuff, but the writte overall was really great.
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