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wounded
Contributed by
wilting_rose
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Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 11:21:01 PM in AEST
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your words cut deeper than than the razors
they rip my heart to pieces
and shred my very soul
I hate you
You should die for the things you have done and said.
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wilting_rose
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2004-07-26 23:21:01]
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Re: wounded
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 12:22:13 AM AEST
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The last line is too harsh.
I am reminded of what Gandalf says to Frodo, in 'The Fellowship of the Ring'.
"Many that live deserve death. And some that die deserve life. Can you give it to them? Then do not be too eager to deal out death in judgement. For even the very wise cannot see all ends." |
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Re: wounded
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 01:30:14 AM AEST
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my my. short and sweet.
dont worry. this person will die eventually. |
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Re: wounded
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 01:38:16 PM AEST
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| I like the last line, emphatically blunt. Also that's what I say to the idiots who made the Catwoman movie.--the Moth |
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