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Bovinity?
Contributed by
Psyche
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Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 10:10:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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“Mooo…,” I say, obnoxiously
Edging onward towards my fate
Crushed against those there before
By bovine who were late
Movie Tickets, Disneyland, Restrooms in a crunch
I stomp and crush and trample
Reminiscent of my lunch
They warned us “You are what you eat!”
And now, with every public battle
I perceive my omnivorous way
For indeed – I’ve become cattle.
Copyright ©
Psyche
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2004-07-26 22:10:59]
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Re: Bovinity?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 10:40:03 PM AEST
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Poem is delightful and does teach a good lesson, but I LOVE THAT COW!!
Rita |
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Re: Bovinity?
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by faith_my_eyes on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 10:47:24 PM AEST
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| Love the coined term, and the irony to it- and a great comparison of our personal actions, not acting quite human |
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 10:47:34 PM AEST
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lol!! right on and way cute:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Bovinity?
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 01:38:43 AM AEST
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that was pretty ***** cool. i loved the second line.
btw, how did you put the cow in?
(img src)? |
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Re: Bovinity?
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 05:21:41 AM AEST
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| Aah..cool..venkat |
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Re: Bovinity?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 08:56:50 AM AEST
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| Cute and oh so true... |
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Re: Bovinity?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 09:11:26 AM AEST
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Succinct social comment. I like the picture - its disturbing in a comic way. And those seagulls add the necessary air of mystery to the entire picture, being, as they are, without sea . . .
Amusing and delectable.
Keep writing, Psyche. |
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Re: Bovinity?
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by pvd on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 05:19:17 PM AEST
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All we need are cattle prods to keep order.
I just this poem is not a bunch of bull.
Nice piece.
PVD |
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Re: Bovinity?
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by hooray_its_jen on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 11:31:54 AM AEST
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Very cute cow, but an even cuter poem! You are just too funny....
~Jenna |
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Re: Bovinity?
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by MoonlitMyst on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:04:09 PM AEST
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Oh me, oh my, I have eaten something yellow.
Was feeling kinda hyper, now I'm just feelin' mellow.
Didn't know I could change so much from munchin' simple mana.
Oh, goodness, please peel me now, for I think I'm a banana!
Sorry--couldn't resist :) I'm a bit giddish after a night of insomnia. I loved the poem. It's funny, cute, and smacks of truth! ***** |
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Re: Bovinity?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:29:45 PM AEST
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| I liked this. Cute write. |
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Re: Bovinity?
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by UnlovedChild on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:46:24 AM AEST
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| This is a very adorable write. You can sure put a smile on someone's face. Great job! |
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