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It's Raining
Contributed by
MyLastBreath
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Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 09:52:34 PM in AEST
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It's raining
Come outside with me
Dance under the stars
And taste the pallid sky
Lie with me in the grass
Keep me in your embrace
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MyLastBreath
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2004-07-26 21:52:34]
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Re: It's Raining
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 12:25:12 AM AEST
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You've completely and perfectly described that moment that I've felt so many times.
This is lovely. Thanks.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: It's Raining
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 01:40:14 AM AEST
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odd.. given the lenght... this really spoke to me nicely... im actually bookmarking it.
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Re: It's Raining
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by AspenGlow on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 10:18:31 AM AEST
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Short, sweet, to the point.
I like this, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: It's Raining
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 06:38:50 PM AEST
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| its absolutly beautiful, tank you so much for sharing, i really enjoyed it |
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