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Death
Contributed by
Immortal_Flarez
on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 09:23:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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A knife in your heart,
Blood covering you,
Pain released from inside of you,
Memories faded,
Your soul set free,
Death is what you desired,
Happiness is what you got...
Wishing for days you would die,
Listening to ways of how you could,
You didn't like being used,
And you still hate it,
Death is what you desired,
Another chance is what you got...
Your free to run,
Your free to hide,
Nothing can harm you,
No one can use you,
Death is what you desired,
A miracle is what you got...
Seeing people mourning over you,
Seeing tears fall on your grave,
You smile in happiness,
Death is what you desired,
Freedom is what you got...
Copyright ©
Immortal_Flarez
... [
2004-07-26 21:23:03]
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Re: Death
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by xRotten_Insidex on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 10:09:47 PM AEST
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| Hey josh your poem is very strong just like all your other ones keep on writing |
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Re: Death
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by waos on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 10:53:23 PM AEST
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| that's definitely a different way to look at things. good job writing it. |
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Re: Death
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 08:54:57 AM AEST
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very deep write, filled with raw emotion and pain
great write,
pixie xx |
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