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Pain
Contributed by
lil_angel
on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 12:17:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I hold the knife up to my skin
It almost makes contact
Then your words enter my head
Your face flashes in my mind
I try to shake the images away
But they won’t leave
I don’t want to disappoint you
Or cause you any more pain
But I am not ready to release this pain yet
I am unsure how
I stare at the knife
I can see my reflection in the metal
I put it down slowly
For I can't disappoint you anymore
For if I do it I know you will
And I can’t have that on my plate
I wanna fall down onto the floor
I wanna curl into a ball and die
But too many people need me
I don’t want to die
There are just days that I want the pain to leave
I promised that I wouldn’t so I won't
I need you to realize that I am not as emotionally stable as I look
That its all a mask not many people know the real me
I want you to know the real me
But from the way you act you don’t want to
Deep down I think you do
You helped in the breaking of my walls
Now help me re-build my heart
I hold the knife up once again
It all starts again
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lil_angel
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2002-10-28 12:17:18]
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Re: Pain
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by SA_RA on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 08:31:27 PM AEST
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| That just the matter of the time and you will not feel like the one of this days...be brave and don't lose the courrage...you'll see...the sun will shine and your brother will be smille with you again..beleive me....I like your poem. |
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Re: Pain
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 10:13:33 AM AEST
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| This write deserves a 5...the raw emotion and the inner turmoil you bring to the mind is truly a work of art. I feel your pain from your words...Very well done! Larry |
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Re: Pain
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by Merkaba on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 07:27:20 PM AEST
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i know i told you before i liked this one but, but i really did enjoy it, and thought it was worth another comment cuz i decided to read it again
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Re: Pain
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 10:39:16 PM AEST
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| i think this write deserves a ten. amazing and brilliant poem. full of emotion. |
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