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Can I be your everything?
Contributed by
LoserLottie
on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:04:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Can I be the person you want me to,
Can I be the light you see,
Can I be the ground you walk on,
Can I be the air you breathe.
Can I be the paper you write on,
Can I be the pen you use,
Can I be your fairy godmother,
Can I be your angel, your muse.
Can I be the window you pear through,
Can I be the song you sing,
Can I be your beating heart,
Can I be your everything.
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2004-07-26 15:04:57]
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Re: Can I be your everything?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:44:29 PM AEST
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| Good rhyming. You've expressed well the feelings of wanting to be part of someone else. |
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Re: Can I be your everything?
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by abie05 on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 03:08:11 AM AEST
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| dats nice .. i like i like =) |
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Re: Can I be your everything?
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 09:16:20 AM AEST
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awww this is wonderful and sweet, great wrtie,
pixie xx |
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Re: Can I be your everything?
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 05:24:18 AM AEST
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| wow a beautiful piece i liked it a lot... |
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