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And then she was gone.
Contributed by
LoserLottie
on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 02:58:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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This girl she was a quiet one,
A lonely soul,
Her hunger for knowledge,
A huge hole.
She did not outstand in the crowd,
She had talent, but wasn't proud,
She wished to disappear,
She wished to fly,
She wished to lift into the sky,
She needed to be free,
To be gone.
She was like a puppet on a string
She was like a lyric in a song.
Each word she thought,
Each picture in her mind,
Should disappear for no one to find.
She wished so hard,
She wished so long,
She wanted to cut the strings and be gone.
Maybe she wished too hard,
Or wished too long.
But the bumper on her forehead,
The wheel over her hand,
And then she was gone.
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2004-07-26 14:58:14]
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Re: And then she was gone.
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:01:31 PM AEST
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Ouch..this is sad.....
Jenni |
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Re: And then she was gone.
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:03:21 PM AEST
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| this reminds me of myself. ill be a little wary of cars for the next few days.... excellent write. =] |
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Re: And then she was gone.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 04:54:06 PM AEST
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| this is one of the saddest poems I have read so far. This was so powerful ! Great Job! |
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