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The loss of petals
Contributed by
LoserLottie
on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 02:35:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Imagine a petal on a flower,
As a year of your life,
Slowly dropping off,
Without a cut of a knife.
But you run out of petals,
After a number of years,
Then all the other flowers,
Are filled with tears.
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LoserLottie
... [
2004-07-26 14:35:13]
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Re: The loss of petals
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 02:49:43 PM AEST
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beautifully sad.... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The loss of petals
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 02:58:32 PM AEST
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Nice write...I always imagine myself as a dry branch......
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Re: The loss of petals
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:07:27 PM AEST
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| another terrific write. |
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Re: The loss of petals
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by Stoney1 on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 05:59:42 AM AEST
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Yeah...I know what you mean...one of my more
vital petals has been wilting lately...
Stoney |
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Re: The loss of petals
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 09:17:13 AM AEST
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very great use of the petals as a year if our lives, I really love your work,....
pixie xx |
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