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Giving Up ( please comment)
Contributed by
IncoherentGirl
on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 01:30:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm sittin here watchin this crimson red blood hit the ground but the world doesn't make a sound
They sit in silence
they don't notice my scars or my tear stained face
they don't realize that i'm slipping away i'm about to just give up cuz i have no reasons to live no one to love me
i've cut before but tonights different i cut too deep but not on accident
i watch my blood hit the floor but still i cut sum more i'm slipping under i'm giving up my time has come and now i'm almost done it's gettin darker now i feel so cold -n- numb i can't feel anything my breathing is slowing down to but i'm not scared i just want to leave so bye can't say i didn't try
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Re: Giving Up ( please comment)
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by kandyklown999 on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 01:41:16 PM AEST
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| aww that sad you were only ten and he was wishing u were dead... : ( |
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Re: Giving Up ( please comment)
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by slayer_015 on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 02:11:42 PM AEST
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I hate that anyone has to feel that much pain,especially inflicted by someone who is supposed to love you more than anyone else.
I understand where you're comming from.Been there myself.Keep writing,it releases the demons. :)
Brian |
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Re: Giving Up ( please comment)
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by theMoth on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:04:44 PM AEST
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| Very effectively blunt. Reminds me of the time my mom left me at a K-Mart on purpose. Too bad she came back! |
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Re: Giving Up ( please comment)
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by Socke on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:38:00 PM AEST
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There's pain inside which we try to forget, we think it helps if we have pain outside, but the pain inside will not leave that easy it will not stop like the blood stop running....I know that I never will understand u completly cuz I can't look inside of u, but just know that I also have so much pain inside of me...
I hope that u someday will be able to forget all that hurts and forgive it, forgave urself for hurting u....
I hug u strong
Lisbeth
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