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Crying Blood
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 11:23:08 AM in AEST
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Crying tears of ruby blood,
Knowing that I am no good,
Feeling like a worthless soul.
Never able to feel truly whole.
It stains my cheeks crimson red,
I feel as if I’d be better off dead,
Droplets drip down from my chin,
Can’t remember where I really begin.
As the tears create a red sea,
Flowing out from deep within me,
I can’t bear this heartache anymore,
Oh how I long to swim to shore.
But I am an outcast in this wasteland,
There’s no-one to hold onto my hand,
I am alone as I walk down my path,
In the distance I hear the ghosts as they laugh.
The tears fall from my pained eyes,
As the rain drops fall from the skies,
Each drop contains some anguish,
Which are too powerful for me to vanquish.
So I must go on crying my red tears,
Wincing as the pain scolds & sears,
Forever must I drown in this misery,
As hurt & I are locked in a conspiracy.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-26 11:23:08]
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Re: Crying Blood
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by _Raspberry_ on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 11:27:32 AM AEST
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| I have to tell you what a wonderfull and touching poem this is. But I also have to give you a big *hug*. Wonderfull write pixie, keep your head up. |
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Re: Crying Blood
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by Soulless on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 11:42:59 AM AEST
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oo ::tear:: I hope you feel better. although I can tell you stripped yourself bare of your emotions onto this poem. Those are my favorite poems.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Crying Blood
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by darkplaidbabe on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 11:49:46 AM AEST
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beautiful write. It was very discriptive and emotional, i loved it. if you ever need to talk IM me. anyway i hope you know how talented you really are! keep writing, im looking forward to it.
Brynna |
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Re: Crying Blood
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 10:10:48 PM AEST
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This poem is absolutely amazing....it realy touched me...i can relate to it soo well....this is a fantastic poem....great job!!!!
Lots of Love
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Re: Crying Blood
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:00:43 AM AEST
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| excellent poem i like the words u use in all of ur poems i liek the feeling you put in them too thank you -grip- |
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Re: Crying Blood
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 01:19:11 PM AEST
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OH PIXIE!
*hugs you*.
i really hope you're not still feeling this low. you're a wonderful person, and youmdefently don't deserve this!
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Re: Crying Blood
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by little_genna on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 06:52:40 AM AEST
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*hugs you tight*
honey this is so thought provoking. Ive needed to do alot of thinking and ive come to the conclusion ive done too much so im now back with ya all on the site!! this is an excellent write by a very talented young lady!!
love and very many hugs
Gen xx |
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