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Being A Loaded Gun
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 11:21:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Being a loaded gun,
I can tell you isn’t much fun,
As you hurt the people who care,
The one’s who are willing to share.
Everything they have with you,
Show you love that is so true,
They stand by your side all the while,
When you say things so hurtful & vile.
I have tried myself for many years,
To calm my rage & stop causing tears,
But I can’t do it on my own,
So last week I picked up the phone.
Told the doctor of my trouble,
Asked him to help me on the double,
Before I destroy my lover’s heart,
As my past words have torn him apart.
My world has been filled with hate,
I thought that it had sealed my fate,
But then I found a love so deep,
I know which one I’d rather keep.
I know that I do need help,
No longer do I want to make others yelp,
From my words that cut like a knife,
I need my Mark to forever be in my life.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-26 11:21:14]
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Re: Being A Loaded Gun
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by _Raspberry_ on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 11:29:40 AM AEST
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| A very sweet and sad write all at the same time. You will do well, realizing that you need to help yourself, is the best thing you can do to start in the right direction. Good luck sweety! |
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Re: Being A Loaded Gun
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 11:30:50 AM AEST
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I'm sure he will be just that.You are only human after all !!
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Re: Being A Loaded Gun
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 11:46:43 AM AEST
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| hmm very emotional write............. |
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Re: Being A Loaded Gun
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 12:42:24 PM AEST
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again, an honest and emotional write - you do well to give some of yourself to each write.
nice job. |
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Re: Being A Loaded Gun
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by Gentledove on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 04:46:34 PM AEST
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A refreshing and honest plea. Surround your self with people who love you and will help you. You can do this.
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Re: Being A Loaded Gun
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 07:41:45 PM AEST
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It takes a strong person to realize they do need to seek help to overcome problems. It is sad when someone just sits back and lets them destroy their lives. Great write, Pix.
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Re: Being A Loaded Gun
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by blueheart on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 08:33:32 PM AEST
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The thing I love most about your writes is the honesty.
I have the same anger problem at times.
Good write. |
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Re: Being A Loaded Gun
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by pvd on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 09:26:45 PM AEST
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Once again you are fearless in opening your soul for all to see. Your honesty about your emotions and feelings is highly commendable. Good write.
PVD |
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Re: Being A Loaded Gun
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 01:22:30 PM AEST
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you go girl!
stay strong. |
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